AkiraToriyamaJR's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Legacy episode 1]

Thank you so much

read karr420 review cause tat is really helpful. Im glad he wrote that cause i had some audio problems but now im gonna download that goldwave thing now. anyway this movie not only amazed me but excited me to. You guys have changed so much it makes me just so happy. to see everyone put more effort into their movies and to take the time to make them look like the ones on tv just makes me wanna come back here more. Sometimes Ng had movies thats only had comedy and thats cool but i wanted a movie that had great animation and great mood. your frame by frame is very good and the fight was detailed. Im glad you used kung fu instead of throwing in kicks and punches ( meaning no style )ill get some people to help u out but i cant wait to part 2 man. you really made my day being the last movie i reviewd and you toped them all. you should talk to the ninjai crew cause their looking for help all the time. againg excellant movie and i know your friends musta loved it. becuase of the quality, my buds will wanna be apart of this. just dont get lazy

[William the Demon Killer]

you guys are really amazing me

Im am so happy and proud. you guys have evolved so much in techinque and style. This movie was so funny and the style of animation was very very different in a great way. You i can say this was better then most cartoons on tv, no lie. before in the past people didnt animate, they kinda drew over stuff you know. their were some real frame by frame animators but no all you guys are just good and im happy for that. It makes me wanna start coming here again becuase the movies are top notch quality. I give you 5 on interactivity cause of the replay background and the buttons and crap. great job man

[Alien Report Part III]

A must see movie

You improved so much man. The movies got a little boring on newgroudns but you made my day man. This was a very very very good sequal. far better then then most others. You manage to use so many angels and even some new ones. I think you are one of few that actually draws out your movies. i can tell becuase the way you draw your character, thats an automatic , Originally drawn movie lol. No but seriously your choice of music was perfect for this type of movie. and i say the only thing you should consider for part 4 is and i think alot have said this...voices. done get me wrong, even without vocies this is still great but with vocies people can feel the scenes out and increase the scenes power. Peiple, this is a must see.

[Taishi 4 A New Hope]

You improved so much doggy. that running scene

You know after a while some of you people gotta say, " have i really seen that many movies on this site where their running sequences are just like regualr cartoons and animes. I dont feel like explaining anymore cause it gets annoying after. Just like you all ask for animators to be more originl, how bout some of you bemore original. try writing more then 1 line, say otehr things besides, " sucks, gay, BLAM!!!, i hate it, unoriginal, best movie ever, this is cool, could be better." He puts alot of work in these movies and to here people say you stole this from the matrix/DBZ/etc pisses me off. Oh and lets not forget the racist bastards on here. Im gonna tell those white kids now cuase i know their white. Watch what you say. This is a mixed ethnic teen talking. Most of you guys are so racist it aint funny and you no why. cause you think you cant be found. Dave this is a big improvement. Oh and tell the real taishi he did a great job including your girl. Now its a cast of 3 and i know youll out do everyone again. I wish they would realize that the matrix isnt the only movie that introduced slow motion and that DBZ isnt the only anime where they transform or whatever. but dont explain cause its just a waste lol.

[For Damon]

You amaze me man

In my school, 5th grade, My friend gary died from his step-dad. He hung him and put him in the closet. his sister found him hours later. Then a couple of days later a 8th grader i didnt know died in the local swimming pool. They went in the pool late at night with skates. I think your really amazing because personally.....i have a strong bond with all my friends. and if any of them died, i dont know what i would do. When Aaliyah died, i was in a trance for 2 years not talking, smiling, eating,walking, anything. ive gotten a lil better dealing with it but the point is i didnt know her personally. Imagine how i would act with my friends. This is why i make sure i know where they are and what they do. I dont know how your friend died ( drunk driving or an accident ) but i am really sorry and i think your doing something really great. In honor of him. This must make him very proud. The thing that affected me was his age. He was born the same year as me ( dec.6,1985 ). I hope you can find someway not to forget him or move on, but to always remember the good times and that he will always be next to you. I beleive in reincarnation. You know when you feel like you know that person. I think you will see him in another life and boy will you guys have so much fun. Doggy im not even gonna comment on the otehr reviewers, forget them. Right now your doing something i think you and his other friends would be proud of. And if you havent yet, get to know the people he knew you didnt know and try to help them as well. Death isnt apart of life. Friends should look out for each other and love each other both boy and girl. I would die literally for my friends and i will always protect them from anything/anyone. as a top jeet kune do/akido/tai chi fighter and future master, always have each other backs. thats all i gotta say.

[F.A.W. - Episode 1a]

hip hop style fused with ninjas....nice doggy

Im really glad you chose a different style to the ninja genre. You and naruto switched the all black, head band ninjas to more down to earth ninjas ( with the traditional japanese/chinese style still in ). i thought you werent gonna animate them at all. some can draw great but only keep a frontal view. You didnt and thats why i like this movie. Great music, sounds and excellant animation, your gonna be really popular on NG. And the hip hop style is a real real nice touch.
My only pointers to ya doggy, get some local people or friends and family to vocie act ( when they voice act, their gonna wanna watch the movie: trust me ), get stronger sound effects and turn up the sounds so it leaves a stronger effect, and pick the music you feel is right. not everyone knows what their talking about. eminem, 50 cent, mystical, jay -z and others have some songs that go great with fighting scenesand others. You just gotta find them. Make sure you have a great story with this and try to make it a big twister ( people like alot of twist ). Last thing, if you want a lower file size. go to control and test movie. then open up a new FLA. and import that SWF. into the FLA. and BAM!!. it lowers the size alot. This movie is amazing and i hope you use my pointers to improve for part 2.

[Hostile]

You really out done the stick generation

Im so glad yo added more than boxes. Your detail in this movie just blew me away. Your vocie acting ( i was surprised you had real voices in her ) was excellant. I love all animation but some movies have the biggest flaw and thats story. You have not only an interesting one but a common yet different one. Your file size i still cant believe and the music went perfect with every scene. And i liked your metal gear sound effect. The biggest thing i can say you did an excellant job on was the scenary. The way you drew that silencer, the computer, the rooms with excellant perspective, the plane, the forest ( my favorite ), i just think that really made the movie. I hope you cnotinue this and show people that movies aint all about death and fighting. story, vocies, sounds, music, and especially scenary help alot. Oh yea love that blood effects lol.

[stick evolution!!]

im sorry man....

you no, even though this doesn't have a story or sound. the score still shouldnt be this low. Not only was that a nice idea but the animation was just smooth. I watched all your movies and you are a great animator. but try to stay on one movie. I found that if you have a great story you or a friend wrote, you wont wanna stop till you see that all thru. I actually am doing something close to this idea. only difference is that it shows the evolution of NG. from sprite to stick to detailed sticks to fully drawn. hey if you want you can do that instead. Im busy with my main movie and i think since your animation is like this you can pull it off. i only suggest that you get an older man or young women to kinda narrorate the history of it. i have the music already and some scenes done but im giving this idea to you. i actually had famous NG flash characters for each bit. like chronos and gokuh for sprites, joe zombie and xiao xiao for sticks, janenba and vegeta for detailed sticks, genryu, taishi, and so many more. email me at [e-mail] and ill explain it more if you wanna do this. again great movie and sorry for typing so much lol. dont stop man, you improve with each movie so stay with it and make them all drop their jaws.

[junkyard beat-up]

This was really different

Your camera movements were very nice and clean. Not to mention your martial art movements, amazing. I really like the way you had the final fight when he did the flying move. That was different meaning you see him coming back back and attacking. You shaded them and you also took the time to make a really cool background. Some reviewers complain your not orginal but you know, reviewers arent either. " this is the best flash ever", " gay blam thiz". and your running style was different which is what i like to do to.Word of advice though, submit this to http://www.sticksuicide.com/ss/
that site belongs to the creator of joe zombie. I dont know what happened but NG people dont like sticks anymore. Your score says it all. So submit it their cause i no youll get an excellant score. please keep this score.

[Smokey: Best Friends]

wow

Ive noticed you guys are starting to use the ameican facial features. Thats excellant. This movie and the zelda parody so far, ive seen it and i love it. I swear i heards smokes voice before on a real tvshow, just cant remember. excellant voice acting and design. OMG and when she came to smoke and ask for a lighter, and he threw his at her, i was dying. I have a really good sense of humor. some times tasteless but i laugh at everything. And this one got me good.